One thing that I learned about you is that you are very proud of the people that you come from! Your family is similar to mine in that mine also enjoys the outdoors. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures of the four seasons. These are very beautiful! The one thing you could change is to add a picture of you to your digital story. As I was watching it is was trying to put a name with a face and couldn't.
One thing I learned about you is that you like to hunt. Our families are the same because they both keep scrapbooks. The bet part was the four seasons, awesome idea and great pics. I don't know much to say to change, well put together
I loved legos!. I learned about your church being burned. Our families our similar in the fact I too have a lot of close cousins. I would change the fact of more pics of you.
I really liked the different pictures you used, especially the seasons. I learned that you like to go hunting. Our families are alike because were close to the families and have to reunions to get together. I do think you should put a picture of yourself in there somewhere but other than that great job!
Daniel. Wow! Your story was wonderful and very insightful! I loved your pictures and the wonderful story behind them. We are alike because I also loved Lincoln Logs! My brother and I played with them all of the time when I was a child. I also learned that you love to hunt, which is another commonality we share. I would not change anything in your story. I think it's great!
I know it would have been better to include a picture of myself for the project, but I just don't like the idea of posting my picture on a public site.
Great job Daniel! I really liked your poem to begin with! Starting with the sound of laughing children was a good artistic choice and set a nice stage for the rest of your photostory! The line I am from God's House burned to the ground by not destroyed is a powerful line! You music, images and words all flowed together wonderfully! You should be proud of this!
One thing that I learned about you is that you are very proud of the people that you come from! Your family is similar to mine in that mine also enjoys the outdoors. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures of the four seasons. These are very beautiful! The one thing you could change is to add a picture of you to your digital story. As I was watching it is was trying to put a name with a face and couldn't.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you like to hunt.
ReplyDeleteOur families are the same because they both keep scrapbooks.
The bet part was the four seasons, awesome idea and great pics.
I don't know much to say to change, well put together
I loved legos!. I learned about your church being burned. Our families our similar in the fact I too have a lot of close cousins. I would change the fact of more pics of you.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the different pictures you used, especially the seasons. I learned that you like to go hunting. Our families are alike because were close to the families and have to reunions to get together. I do think you should put a picture of yourself in there somewhere but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteDaniel. Wow! Your story was wonderful and very insightful! I loved your pictures and the wonderful story behind them. We are alike because I also loved Lincoln Logs! My brother and I played with them all of the time when I was a child. I also learned that you love to hunt, which is another commonality we share. I would not change anything in your story. I think it's great!
ReplyDeleteI know it would have been better to include a picture of myself for the project, but I just don't like the idea of posting my picture on a public site.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Daniel! I really liked your poem to begin with! Starting with the sound of laughing children was a good artistic choice and set a nice stage for the rest of your photostory! The line I am from God's House burned to the ground by not destroyed is a powerful line! You music, images and words all flowed together wonderfully! You should be proud of this!
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